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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 3:08:23 GMT -5
 ---------------------------- ---------------------------- » Follow the forum rules, along with my rules.
» Be polite when chatting, though your characters can be rude.
» Be realistic. No rainbow pelts, wings, etc though stuff like male tortoiseshells are allowed.
» No Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu/Perfect OCs
» Keep Genders even,so don't make five she-cats
and only one tom or five toms and one she cat.
---------------------------- Landmarks
The Great Dirt Hill
» a massive place where mudslides are highly common
Sandy River
» a small river with plenty of sand, small pebbles,
and fish, especially salmon
The Death Bog
» never approach, it's an extremely dangerous swamp
area where cats can sink in the muck easily
Camp
Leader's Den
» A small hollow tree that's half sunken into the
ground due to a previous mudslide
Medicine Den
» A smallish hole under a large, steady boulder
Warriors Den
» An open patch of grass with moss and feather
nests, and a wall of brambles for protection
Apprentices Den
» A large, safe hedge
Nursery and Elders Den
» A medium sized underground room filled with
nests of feather and moss. Enough room for the
queens, elders, and kits.
Prey Pile
» A small, flat rock covered with ferns on it
to protect the prey from the heat in the summer
and ice in the winter.
---------------------------- Form
Name - Gender - Age - Rank
Description, looks, personality, history
Taken Prefixes
Beetle, Oat, Rowan, Sedge, Bright, Lily, Misty, Silver, Graying, Apple, Rain
Wind ---------------------------- Leader
Beetlestar - Tom
He is a handsome Cream tabby tom,with a pink nose and paw pads, he has distinctive faded green eyes that are almost grey,He can be very vain and will snap if others question his authority as leader, he will not hesitate to change the warrior code to suit his needs the only part of the code that matters to him is 'the clans leaders word is warrior code' but he does's twist that to suit him saying that he is above the warrior code and can change it at any time, he was a abandoned by his twolegs when he was just a kit but later picked up and cared for by a cat who was Goldenclans deputy at that time.
Lives;
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Deputy
Open
Medicine Cat
Open
Medicine Cat Apprentice
Open
Warriors
Oatpelt - Tom
White tom with dark brown patches and light brown patches similar to the markings of a tortoiseshell with light blue eyes,he is very kind and caring sometimes going out of his way for others it does take him a while to warm up to other being shy he barely ever loses his cool even under pressure but he can sometimes give into fear and run in the face of danger,he grew up as a kittypet until his brother Beetlefall/star made him join the clan, he still misses the love and affection of his housefolk.
[𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚜𝚝𝚢 ❄ ]
Brightfeather- She-cat
Wip
[𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚜𝚝𝚢 ❄ ]
Apprentices
Rowanpaw - Tom - 7 - Apprentice
He hates any social gathering. He tries as hard as he can to get out of anything,and if he HAS to go, he hides behind his sister, Windpaw, the whole time. A soft brownish yellow tabby with green eyes and a reddish-pink nose and paw pads.. He has dark brown stripes and a white underbelly. He's shy and introverted. He mostly hides behind his sister, and can't fend for himself, making him the butt of many jokes. He and his sister were found on the far side of the clan territory. They were raised in the clan.
[Armageddidn't]
Windpaw - She-Cat - 7 - Apprentice
She tries to get her brother to go to more social events than he does. She's a golden-brown tabby with blue eyes. She has silverish-gold stripes and a pure-white underbelly.She's outgoing and adventurous, wanting to try everything, usually begging her brother, Rowanpaw, to come along.
[Armageddidn't ]
Sedgepaw- She-cat
Wip
[𝚏𝚛𝚘𝚜𝚝𝚢 ❄ ]
Queens
Open
Kits
Open
Elders
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 3:10:25 GMT -5
---------------------------- {♀} means x is female
{♂} means x is male
{X ♥ Y ≡ Z} means x and y are the parents of z
{X ➣ Y} means x is mentor to y
{X ⇢ Y} means x has a crush on y
{X ♡ Y} means x and y like each other
{X ♥ Y} means x and y are mates
{X ღ Y} means x and y are ex-mates
{X's Name} means x is deceased
Mentor List
Oatpelt ➣Rowanpaw
Relationships
None yet
Family
Unknown[♀]Unknown ♥ [♂] ≡ Beetlestar[♀] and Oatpelt[♂]
---------------------------- Fanart
None yet
Other
The clan has been reset!!! ---------------------------- Bordering Clans
None
Border Threads
None ---------------------------- |
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Song Of The Sky
I'm new but know how to use forums. Like my posts if you want me to respond faster!
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Post by Song Of The Sky on Nov 15, 2016 8:13:30 GMT -5
Just a little comment, you might want to add the territory description or camp description or even the clan's history. It might make everything a lot more detailed. I'm giving a suggestion, so it's up to you. If you already thought of this and just didn't put it up yet, sorry for bothering you.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 17:37:48 GMT -5
Just a little comment, you might want to add the territory description or camp description or even the clan's history. It might make everything a lot more detailed. I'm giving a suggestion, so it's up to you. If you already thought of this and just didn't put it up yet, sorry for bothering you. Yeah well i'm still figuring out what to call this clan so thanks for the feedback feel free to join if you wish. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2016 20:32:34 GMT -5
Name: Stonestrike
Gender: Male
Rank: Deputy
Stonestrike is a large ragdoll cat with long hair, a white pelt with grey splotches and green eyes.
He's the strong and silent type. Prefers negotiating over war and will do anything to protect his clan.
Brief history:
Stonestrike was born in the clan and the son to Mistleleaf and Ferrettail as Stonekit. Later as Stonepaw, he was mentored to a senior warrior who taught him everything he knows now. His mentor was a parental figure soon after his apprenticeship because of a series of unfortunate circumstances which left him parentless. After moons of training and passing his final assessment, he was named Stonestrike, the suffix coming from his hard hitting paws and combat skills. Brother to Seedlight.
I'm open to siblings, but only two! The genders don't matter to me. Feel free to ask. c:
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2016 20:39:46 GMT -5
Name: Stonestrike Gender: Male Rank: Deputy Stonestrike is a large ragdoll cat with long hair, a white pelt with grey splotches and green eyes. He's the strong and silent type. Prefers negotiating over war and will do anything to protect his clan. Brief history: Stonestrike was born in the clan and the son to Mistleleaf and Ferrettail as Stonekit. Later as Stormpaw, he was mentored to a senior warrior who taught him everything he knows now. His mentor was a parental figure soon after his apprenticeship because of a series of unfortunate circumstances which left him parentless. After moons of training and passing his final assessment, he was named Stonestrike, the suffix coming from his hard hitting paws and combat skills. I'm open to siblings, but only two! The genders don't matter to me. Feel free to ask. c:Nice i'll add you,you can reserve Prefixs for later Cats you wanna make,if you choose |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2016 20:40:31 GMT -5
My OCs (they are a bit long you don't have to make yours this length)
Beetlestar-Tom-Leader
He is a handsome Cream tabby tom,with a pink nose and paw pads,he has distinctive faded green eyes that are almost grey,He can be very vain and will snap if others question his authority as leader,he will not hesitate to change the warrior code to suit his needs the only part of the code that matters to him is 'the clans leaders word is warrior code' but he does's twist that to suit him saying that he is above the warrior code and can change it at any time,he was a abandoned by his twolegs when he was just a kit but later picked up and cared for by a clan deputy at that time.
Seedlight-She-cat-Queen
She is a pale ginger tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes.she is very bright and cheerful being very optimistic about the future,she doesn't mind Beetlestars rule as leader but thinks they need a better leader.she is expecting kits very soon it is unknown who the father is it isn't a rule to revel the father of the kits,Seedlight is clanborn her warrior name was chosen because of her bright outlook and positive attitude her brother is Stonestrike
Anyone can make one of her kit if they want,she will be having three kits,i might make one later.
(i'm reserving Prefixs Rye and Oat for later)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2016 21:19:18 GMT -5
Should we wait for other to join or do i post the starter now)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2016 22:40:40 GMT -5
(Maybe wait a little bit for one or a couple more people? If it takes too long, you can start if you want.)
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Post by kidcat on Nov 17, 2016 0:47:41 GMT -5
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firestorm35
college student so I might be a little inactive at some points (:
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Post by firestorm35 on Nov 17, 2016 0:51:47 GMT -5
Snowdance - She-cat - Warrior
A white, fluffy she-cat that is on the smaller side. Her pelt has light gray, almost white swirls that are barely noticeable unless you look closely. Her pays are a darker gray, like she accidently stepped in gray paint. Her abnormally large eyes are a deep royal blue with a few golden flecks when you look closely. Her eyes aren't the only thing abnormally bigger. Her ears are a tad too big, but she's still a pretty she-cat. She's a bit older than 17 moons. If her looks don't win you over, her sweet and loveable personality hopefully will. She has her moments when she's timid and shy, but most of the time she is out-going and hoping to always make new friends. You can always talk to her because she'll enjoy the conversation.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 0:58:09 GMT -5
(here's a banner if you want it) Wow thank you so much that looks awesome) |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 0:59:11 GMT -5
Snowdance - She-cat - Warrior A white, fluffy she-cat that is on the smaller side. Her pelt has light gray, almost white swirls that are barely noticeable unless you look closely. Her pays are a darker gray, like she accidently stepped in gray paint. Her abnormally large eyes are a deep royal blue with a few golden flecks when you look closely. Her eyes aren't the only thing abnormally bigger. Her ears are a tad too big, but she's still a pretty she-cat. She's a bit older than 17 moons. If her looks don't win you over, her sweet and loveable personality hopefully will. She has her moments when she's timid and shy, but most of the time she is out-going and hoping to always make new friends. You can always talk to her because she'll enjoy the conversation. Fantastic i'll add her) |
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Post by kidcat on Nov 17, 2016 0:59:16 GMT -5
(no problem! I was bored and i like to help out when possible :3)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 1:01:43 GMT -5
(no problem! I was bored and i like to help out when possible :3) XD you can make a cat or two if you want medicine cats still open) |
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Post by kidcat on Nov 17, 2016 1:09:35 GMT -5
(Sure i can take the med. cat spot and also RP one of Seedlight's kits if you'd like)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 1:10:35 GMT -5
Sure i'll reserve them for you,thanks again)
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firestorm35
college student so I might be a little inactive at some points (:
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Post by firestorm35 on Nov 17, 2016 1:12:46 GMT -5
(Should we start roleplaying or wait for more people to join?)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 1:16:08 GMT -5
(Should we start roleplaying or wait for more people to join?) We can start when kidcat is done making his cats) |
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Post by kidcat on Nov 17, 2016 1:28:53 GMT -5
(sorry that took awhile)
Sheepfur - Tom - Medicine Cat
Sheepfur is a good-natured tom, rather imposing in stature. His broad shoulders are exaggerated by the length of his light gray fur, which is unusually curly (and unfortunately prone to matting, if he's not careful). He lives with a permanent limp, which he's had since birth. He's rather agreeable most of the time, but has a bit of a temper, to the great displeasure of kits and apprentices who don't want to take their medicine. His eyes are hazel in color. He is 52 moons old.
Salmonkit - She-cat - Kit
Salmonkit is playful, like most kits, but tends to get into trouble more often than others. She has mottled ginger and white fur, with baby blue eyes. She is standoffish and stubborn, and doesn't like to behave, which can make her a pain to deal with. To her friends, however, she is imaginative and fun, her gift for storytelling making every role-playing game exciting. She is ? moons old.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 1:31:21 GMT -5
(sorry that took awhile) Sheepfur - Tom - Medicine Cat Sheepfur is a good-natured tom, rather imposing in stature. His broad shoulders are exaggerated by the length of his light gray fur, which is unusually curly (and unfortunately prone to matting, if he's not careful). He lives with a permanent limp, which he's had since birth. He's rather agreeable most of the time, but has a bit of a temper, to the great displeasure of kits and apprentices who don't want to take their medicine. His eyes are hazel in color. He is 52 moons old. Salmonkit - She-cat - Kit Salmonkit is playful, like most kits, but tends to get into trouble more often than others. She has mottled ginger and white fur, with baby blue eyes. She is standoffish and stubborn, and doesn't like to behave, which can make her a pain to deal with. To her friends, however, she is imaginative and fun, her gift for storytelling making every role-playing game exciting. She is ? moons old. (love the names samonkit will be added when the kits are born) |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 1:36:40 GMT -5
(Here's the starter)
Beetlestar smiled in satisfaction at his orderly clan he loved for everything to be where he wanted,he made sure his loyal deputy and other clanmates appreciated the prime land,food,recourse and company they had here.he could see Seedlight in the nursery her kits were due about any day now maybe in a few moons when they are old enough one of them his apprentice.he remembered when he was a carefree handsome apprentice Those were the days he thought with a hint of sadness.he shook his head it wasn't the time to be thinking of the past his focus had to be the future his part in the clan was vital.
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Post by kidcat on Nov 17, 2016 1:37:35 GMT -5
Sheepfur shuffled about the medicine den, mumbling to himself. "Comfrey..." He swore there was comfrey. There must have been. He remembered drying and sorting it. And yet... where was it?
He racked his memory. It couldn't have just disappeared. Maybe they'd run out. Maybe it had gotten wet and he'd thrown it out, and he'd just forgotten all about it until now. Oh... yes! As a matter of fact, that was exactly what had happened. Goodness, he was too young for his memory to be going already.
Sheepfur made his way out into camp, hoping to run into someone who could assist him in gathering more. He didn't have an apprentice of his own, but he was of the belief that any young cat could benefit from learning to recognize herbs and learn their applications. As he limped into camp, he noticed Beetlestar.
"Good morning," he meowed, nodding his head.
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firestorm35
college student so I might be a little inactive at some points (:
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Post by firestorm35 on Nov 17, 2016 1:42:48 GMT -5
Snowdance laid in the sun, bathing in the sunlight, her fluffy white fur moving slowly in the light breeze. Her eyes fluttered open and yawned. She drew a paw over her ears to straighten her fur out. The small she cat got up and stretched, heading to the fresh kill pile. She spotted that it was a little low. Maybe someone would like to go hunting with me she wondered.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 1:46:13 GMT -5
(I'll be leaving in now minutes when i leave you can continue rping i should be back in about a hour)
Beetlestar flashed a gentle smile "Do you want some help with that?" he asked thoughtfully seeing his predicament,he must of been stress having to worry about so many others and their health at his age and stature,he could't leave Sheepfur to do everything "also you can ask a warrior if you need herbs collected" he added seeing a bundle of comfry on the floor "must of been blow out by the Storm last night" he said picking up the small bundle between his teeth.
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Post by kidcat on Nov 17, 2016 1:51:57 GMT -5
(ok! i also might go to bed soon but im not sure)
"Thanks," Sheepfur said, nodding. "I'm sure it was," he continued, bitterness seeping into his tone now. "It's a real waste. Just when I'd gotten everything organized, too. It's all scattered around like this." Sheepfur twitched his whiskers in agitation. "I'll see if Snowdance can help me, then, if it's not inconvenient." He really only said that because she was the only one in camp at the moment who didn't appear to be busy.
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firestorm35
college student so I might be a little inactive at some points (:
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Post by firestorm35 on Nov 17, 2016 2:08:36 GMT -5
Snowdance's ears shot up when she heard her name. She grinned and padded over to the two toms. "Hello!" she purred. "I couldn't help but overhear that you wanted some help. I'd love to." She felt so short next to them but she wasn't intimidated.... okay maybe a little.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 3:22:45 GMT -5
Beetlestar smiled kindly "don't worry i'm sure Sheepfur can handle himself,we don't need him yelling at us for messing with his order" he said leading her to the prey pile "Can you drop some of this off and get ready to meet me at the camp entrance for hunting" he mewed sighing the prey pile was bare to say the least.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2016 11:55:07 GMT -5
Stonestrike sat outside the wall of brambles covering the warrior's den, taking in the scenery of the peaceful camp and letting the soft breeze fluff up his pelt. He opened his eyes and his gaze flickered to the small group of cats in the clearing. The tom rose to his paws, walking over to them and greeted them each with a dip of his head. "Sheepfur, Snowdance, Beetlestar."
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Post by [~Ghost Writer~] on Nov 17, 2016 12:25:10 GMT -5
Cloverkit-Tom-Kit
a light ginger Tom with little bits of silver and white fur sticking out. he has light brown eyes and little tufts of fur sticking out that should smooth out a bit once he grows up. he also has tiny tufts of fur on his, smaller than most, ears. He's more of a logical thinker than most kits, always trying to find solutions for problems. he likes to be included in the older cats conversations and often likes to argue his point. His mother is Seedlight
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