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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 28, 2017 16:09:23 GMT -5
i kinda wanna see the scourge and fire relationship more elaborated on like where they actually talk, and fire finds out their related (via Jake or Tallstar maybe? Considering Tallstar knew Firestar was Jake's son and such, maybe he knew Scourge was his son too idk)
oh lord so many ideas
the person writing it has a lot cut out for them
i'd also love to see more of redtail as deputy
and i'd love to see the whole firexspotted thing vanished smh
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 28, 2017 17:36:49 GMT -5
i never realized i needed a rewrite of the series until now oh my gosh--
whta if they did dust x sand instead of sand x fire and dust x fern.., i could kinda see that happening. After all, Dustpelt was there with Sandstorm first. The hostility she had for Firepaw/heart only went away because he saved her life once. i kinda wanted to see "you may have saved me this time, fireheart, but you're still a kittypet to me" or something
but also, i do love sandxfire, more than i've ever supported firexcinder or firexspotted. those two were just a dud idk why people are shipping them tbh
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 28, 2017 18:15:05 GMT -5
There are so many ways the Erin's could've taken the story the way they went may not have been the best yet it didn't exactly disappoint if an 18 year old (me btw) can still read these books without wanting to cut my head off i think it's fine
but kudos to the guy/girl (don't wanna assume a gender yikes) for putting themselves to the task of rewriting the stories. I'll definitely read it c:
i see what you saying. I also would've liked to see fire stay a single kitty but hey he needed to have cats follow in his paw steps.
i'm lowkey a major gray x fire shipper ngl i guess we also didn't need another tallstar nor did they want to do the same thing for fire that they did with onestar smh but firestar mating with a kittypet would've been a good plot, where the clan feels like he isn't loyal in the end
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 1:24:33 GMT -5
how can i be of some assistance?
i just wrote a long a** chapter of a fanfic oml it's just one chapter but i'm lowkey proud
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 17:18:22 GMT -5
whats it about tho??
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 18:38:06 GMT -5
that sounds really cool though omg
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 20:54:29 GMT -5
i mean, my muse for it is little, but i'd love to do an rp with you still :")
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 21:19:33 GMT -5
i've actually never read dawn of the clans so idk how good that would go
but i'm actually up for a canon twist (thats what imma call it eheh)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 21:48:04 GMT -5
i'm kinda interested in doing one before the first arc tbh, maybe one around tallstar's revenge? or even bluestar's prophecy?
i really enjoyed the whole windclan tunnelers thing.
but if we did the personality changes,, or maybe different evil/good characters tigerclaw ends up good, fireheart is evil or maybe lionheart or whitestorm is the evil one i only say whitestorm bc his father was thistleclaw, and maybe he could be training blindly in the dark forest with his father after he died or somethin idk and if we did Tigerclaw is good, maybe bluestar trained him instead? idkidk
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 29, 2017 22:11:36 GMT -5
i actually kinda like that idea plus i like the idea of an evil fire wh oops. i kinda like that idea, ngl. plus i lowkey (if its okay) always wanted to rp fire oops but i have a little idea for bluestar's prophecy, which changes bluepaw/fur/star's personality to where when her mother is killed by hawkheart (windclan's medicine cat at the time) she feels a burning hatred that never goes away, which causes her to never meet up with oakheart (she'll have a hatred towards other clans) and she is lowkey like thistleclaw, and thistlexblue is a thing instead of thistlexsnow and bluexoak all in all: evil bluestar
i havent read skyclan's destiny in forever so i kinda cant remember what happens but i wouldn't mind doing something skyclan based (daylight warriors are absolutely ridiculous though plus the names like wth?? billystorm?????)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 30, 2017 2:34:28 GMT -5
I don't see why leafstar let it be a thing. Because firestar was a kitty pet??? So she thought they could live with a paw in both worlds? They were supposed to live up to the code And warrior code rule 15. A warrior rejects the soft life of a kittypet Yet what happened???? They had a paw in both worlds. Anyways, I'm up for doing that plot if you are
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 30, 2017 3:02:46 GMT -5
we could start where rusty is first seen maybe tigerclaw is with lionheart instead of bluestar and they inform bluestar that they invited the kittypet because maybe he put up a better fight with graypaw than he did in the books
and, since tigerclaw was always against kittypets maybe the battle impresses him a lot bc rusty almost kills graypaw until hes pushed off by lionheart & what not
which leads to another point; gray and fire never become good friends bc of that, but they do talk sand and dust never hated him bc they hear how he almost killed graypaw
and i was thinking ravenpaw isn't as skittish as he is in the books, maybe he's fine bc tigerclaw isn't his mentor. as for who could be his mentor, maybe it's runningwind or something idk
(oh well sure, sir, i'm rusty, a kittypet, at ur service sir i'm getting nervous)
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Post by exceed on Jul 30, 2017 3:15:55 GMT -5
hmm maybe. you'll have to give me a rundown of the first arc, though- i know the big events, but not some of the smaller ones and the details.
and tigerclaw decides "hey, no better way to get a kittypet adjusted to clan life than to make sure he's guided by me... and to cultivate his loyalty also,,, a cooler tigerclaw in this than in the books although he was p cool before
yeah, they wouldn't be good friends. i'd think that gray & raven would be good friends while fire is drawn closer to sand & dust- sand & fire would bicker still but they'd respect eachother
hmm (looks at book) maybe runningwind or mousefur, yeah. who's willowpelt??? i dont remember her?? or this frostfur cat?? and who becomes dust's mentor after redtail kicks the bucket? and oh man oh man what if spotted dies but. yellow doesnt come in, she's driven off by tc, who's the meddie then? a warrior good with herbs could become it, i guess. idk who tho
(starring cloudtail as philip hamilton, getting killed in a fight with a different clan's warriors bc they insulted fire) (ooh what if fire gets a different warrior name?? bc tiger influenced him?????)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 30, 2017 3:28:01 GMT -5
thats okay, i'm kinda rusty on the first arc myself, and remember most of the major stuff that happens, but i remember some of the minor things.
yes, i'd like that a lot. Plus, Tiger seemed to b really interested in fire's training at the beginning until blue took him as her apprentice. or is that just what i feel so i feel like if he was tiger's apprentice, they'd have a better relationship & not hate each others guts (that tiger gets spilled out in the battle against bloodclan)
i also feel like sand and fire would develop a relationship where they feel more like brother and sister, so they dont end up together, (and maybe in the end, cinder never breaks her leg and we could do cinderxfire idk)
i'll let u choose between those two. But i think mousefur is too young or something?? Bc i think at the beginning of into the wild, she was just recently made a warrior or somethin'. I think Willowpelt is gray's mother. also, she has sorreltail, sootfur and rainwhisker later on. her mate is whitestorm ithink. Frostfur is the mother of Brightheart, Cinderpelt, Brackenfur and Thornclaw. Darkstripe is Dust's mentor when Red dies. I was thinking we have her die after brightpaw is mauled by dogs and so she becomes a medicine cat instead of a warrior so cloudtail has no1
(ohnoohno SPEAKING OF, CAN WE ACTUALLY GIVE FIRE A SON OR TWO LIKE WTH.) (tbh i like that, but what would be a good name i have an oc named fireblaze but maybe he could be fireclaw or firestorm,,.)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Jul 30, 2017 3:57:09 GMT -5
exactlllyyyy
ok dust/fire would be kinda cute ngl.., Maybe sand could end up being the surrogate, but her actual mate could be gray or raven. or maybe shes a lesbian, that'd be nice or asexual/aromantic. I feel like she'd also be extremely independent. tbh dont worry about territories; i have the same problem.
runningwind it is then ye. same same, i'm ok w that idk why they had so many queens. The only one i rlly liked was Goldenflower and Brindleface ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Rainwhisker died by a falling branch or something and sootfur died off in the badger attack, i think. w/ cinderpelt. sorreltail was the only one living out of that litter. Until she died. (can we still make sorrelxbracken a thing, that was my favorite hetero ship) yes yes, that's what i meant. Spotted dies in some other way, after bright loses an eye and such. that works for me, maybe river is extremely against tiger being leader & such NOBODY KNOWS ABOUT MISTY AND STONE BEING BLUE'S KITS, STONEFUR NEVER DIES
ok what confuses me is that tallstar died at 10 years, and mistystar is going on 13 years, she old, and apparently tall died of old age bluestar was only 6 years old when she died and was considered old firestar died at 8 wth why is misty still ALIVE
(and they're extremely ambitious omg, but one ends up the medicine cat in the end bc someone has to be leafpool >.<) (^^ does that all also mean fire and sand never find skyclan) (I kinda wanna stick with fire- bc of the prophecy i guess. Plus, it still fits him. He has a fiery ambition to lead behind tiger. Firestep is a really cool name too, tho c": )
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Post by exceed on Jul 30, 2017 4:07:22 GMT -5
yeye. i see her as ace/aro, tbh. strong independent gal. she loves the kits to death tho bc she's a great mom, even tho shes not in love with dust & fire
golden was chill. she & tiger prob end up being good good friends & want kits but they're not really mates? so bramble & tawny get loving parents but golden & tiger aren't mates
*STORMFUR NOT STONEFUR IM SCREAMING
misty has starclan's blessing, she is immortal and will never die i really like misty imo she's cool golden died at 9
(they prob have like a tom & two shecats and the tom ends up the meddie bc he just,,,,, really loves helping others but he wants to be the BEST medicine cat EVER and fire, dust, & sand just. avidly cheer him on. meanwhile, his sisters tease him endlessly. they're ferocious great warriors in the end) (alright ^^ i like firestep the most, tbh, but firestrike is my second. firestep bc maybe he's v nimble and quick in fighting with tiger's training)
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