Frost
The shortest distance between two points is a straight line in the opposite direction
Pronouns: They/them/he/her
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Post by Frost on Sept 1, 2017 21:36:53 GMT -5
It's not a problem and anytime you need to edit, let me know I like the idea of your characters although I think their personalities could be a bit more developed and dynamic. Especially with the amount of detail you put into their descriptions. (Okay, thank you. ) (I agree with you there; I guess I rushed their personalities. I will get to work on it as soon as I can. Any tips? I normally describe the personalities of my characters in point form. )
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Frost
The shortest distance between two points is a straight line in the opposite direction
Pronouns: They/them/he/her
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Post by Frost on Sept 1, 2017 21:44:54 GMT -5
Thank you a bunch! Should I edit their personalities first or quote them for linking purposes first? And as for the latter step... When I quote each of their descriptions separately, what do I do then? Do I just quote them and say something and re-post it? If so, where do I post it do? I am so lost. :/)
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Frost
The shortest distance between two points is a straight line in the opposite direction
Pronouns: They/them/he/her
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Post by Frost on Sept 1, 2017 21:47:02 GMT -5
Just quote them separately that way when you need to edit something, you can Oh I get it now, thank you. I thought there was this super complicated process I had to do afterwards. Um... Other than the quoted characters and the links you sent me (after I asked how I can improve the personalities of my characters), feel free to delete the rest of the clutter that has built up during our discussion here. I don't want it to "harm" the actual RP or something.)
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Frost
The shortest distance between two points is a straight line in the opposite direction
Pronouns: They/them/he/her
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Post by Frost on Sept 1, 2017 21:56:10 GMT -5
It isn't a harm as the rp isn't on this page but I went ahead and deleted everything you won't need) (Okay, thank you. I am editing their personalities now. I shall notify you when I re-post Bálor and Flintstrike.) (Also, even though I will focus a lot of my time into the PineClan RP, I have recently posted a 1x1 RP called 🐾 1x1 RP - Journey of a Thousand Pawsteps (PLEASE JOIN!) 🐾 , and I was wondering if you'd be interested in taking a look at it. And no, this isn't an "advertising scam" or anything. Haha)
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Frost
The shortest distance between two points is a straight line in the opposite direction
Pronouns: They/them/he/her
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Post by Frost on Sept 1, 2017 22:21:03 GMT -5
Please don't advertise and you don't need to notify me, it's ok) (My apologies. It was more of a request... Nevermind. Anywho, my characters are ready.)
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2017 22:26:18 GMT -5
Also guys, can we delete some of the posts to get rid of the chatting here? I'm a bit crazy for organization but ah somehow I feel it's messy. cx Not all of them but namely the repeated forms and such for less clutter! And Accepted, I'll likely add later or tomorrow as I want to rp and rest right now. cx
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Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Sept 1, 2017 22:27:16 GMT -5
Great! New people to Pineclan!
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Sept 1, 2017 22:27:57 GMT -5
Xenialpaw || 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 || 9 moons || Collector, Vigilant- Xenialpaw is a fluffy mainly black she-cat with only few spots of white, which are on her ear-tips, paws, her tail, and a set of aligned specks under her eyes. She has bright indigo colored eyes, and has a small yet agile build.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Xenialheart Personality: Xenialpaw is named for her kindness and intelligence, Xenial meaning hospitality, she knows to trust her heart. However she is not one for being pushed around. She might be kind, but she is usually humorous and sarcastic. Often she takes on the role of a leader. What she lacks in strength she makes up for in speed and smarts. She is usually confident, but can be rather sensitive at times. Mate/Crush: None yet, would like to develope Kits, if any: None Relationships: Fallowfur as a secret mentor(Formely) History: Had trained in secret as a medicine cat under Fallowfur in Timberclan, and had left after this secret act was discovered, as she had already been assigned as a warrior. She lived as a rogue for sometime(Current) before she joined/joins. She acts mainly as a collector, but is more knowledgeable in herbs then a normal collector due to her secret training, she likes hiding this fact that way she can be seen as useful as a vigilant. Other: FishyIf you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 3, to Allow someone else to rp them by default, with understanding if you rejoin you'll have them back, but also knowing the new rper can kill them off before then if they choose. (User will not be allowed to use the cat outside this rp as it is still your character, unless you say otherwise.) NOTE: If the character had not had a big role yet, such as a high rank, active rping, a mate rped by someone else, ect, the cat will be deleted without any in rp death as if not there.
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Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Sept 1, 2017 22:29:36 GMT -5
Yay! Another person!
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Sept 1, 2017 22:33:18 GMT -5
(I've been planning to join, there's a interesting plot with her I have talked with Rain about, so she already knows about her.)
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Post by Deleted on Sept 1, 2017 23:06:59 GMT -5
Accepted Lynx! I'll add later. You may rp however.
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Non-binary
exceed
yo i like cats
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Post by exceed on Sept 2, 2017 2:23:56 GMT -5
Quietbee || ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ || 38 moons || Warrior, Hunter, Fisher- A small dappled light brown she-cat with a lighter belly and golden eyes. She is slim and quite tiny, despite being a full grown warrior, and is quite unsuited for fighting. Somewhat fragile, although quick with a healthy amount of stamina in her tiny body.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: n/a unless needed Personality: Soft-spoken and easily startled. Kind, and almost never angers all that much. Quiet to the point where she's near silent in her movement, which often scares other cats in turn. A firm pacifist that refuses to fight and doesn't like to see others fight, although she won't tell them off. Only fights in self-defense. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any:Relationships: Pinewasp is her brother, and their parents, Elmwhisper and Nettleheart, are both dead. History: Born and raised in the clan. Not too much notable other than that their parents died of sickness. Other: fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 1, to be Deleted and Killed off in RP, either off screen/during a timeskip or temporarily rped by another user or you before quitting.
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Non-binary
exceed
yo i like cats
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Post by exceed on Sept 2, 2017 2:24:16 GMT -5
Pinewasp || ᶤᶰᵏ ᵃᶰᵈ ᵇᵒᶰᵉ || 38 moons || Warrior, Vigilant, Hunter- A slim darker brown dappled tom with a very light chest and belly. Has golden eyes. Quick and agile with a lean frame, he is built for speed and stamina. Long-legged, although he isn't too tall. Has rather large ears, good for picking up many sounds.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Would like an apprentice. Personality: Rather snappish if he's tired or annoyed, Pinewasp will lash out at anyone close by if he's bored, angry, or frustrated. Has a short temper and can claw those that he gets quite angry at, although he's not the strongest cat in the world. Likes to not be bothered, although he can engage in civil conversation once in a while. Mate/Crush: Kits, if any: Relationships: Quietbee is his sister, and their parents, Elmwhisper and Nettleheart, are both dead. History: Born and raised in the clan. Not too much notable other than that their parents died of sickness. Other: fishy. Open for a mate or crush if there's anyone that wants it. If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one):Option 1, to be Deleted and Killed off in RP, either off screen/during a timeskip or temporarily rped by another user or you before quitting.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2017 2:29:06 GMT -5
Both accepted. ^u^ I'll add them later. Which is the father and which is the mother?
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Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Sept 2, 2017 2:33:06 GMT -5
Oml. So many peoples joined today!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2017 2:35:40 GMT -5
Ok. And Leaf your like PineClans' welcome committee. cx I dub thee such. And Ink and bone (What do you prefer to be called?) feel free to rp! I can update you on the latest or you can skim and read back. ^u^
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Post by 𝕊𝕙𝕒𝕕𝕠𝕨 on Sept 2, 2017 10:29:11 GMT -5
I changed Xenial's age to 9 moons, to make her more realistic.
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Post by Nami on Sept 2, 2017 18:12:43 GMT -5
LittlePaw|| Nami || 6 Moons Old. Is becoming an apprentice right after she is accepted. || Apprentice- She has a black,dark red, and white fox style pelt. She is a she-cat. She has long legs and broad shoulders for climbing. She also has deep sea blue eyes. Code: IDK
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Warrior Name: (IF a kit/apprentice/loner who'll join, what is your suggestion for warrior name! Or you want it to be a surprise? IF a warrior, delegate, deputy, or leader, you can also request a to mentor apprentice without a mentor, the warrior should be at/around 19-20 moons or more to have an apprentice. I shall assign the apprentice, so just put "would like an apprentice." and I'll assign them one! If nothing, just say n/a or leave blank.)I Need A Mentor. Personality: Shy,Anger Problems,Quiet,Timid, Extremely Jumpy (required) Mate/Crush: None (can leave blank) Kits, if any: None (can leave blank) Relationships: None (family, friends, ect) History: orphaned kit. left to die by the moutain pass where PineClan is traveling. (please at least state of clan born, ect) Other: Fishy!Option 3, to Allow someone else to rp them by default, with understanding if you rejoin you'll have them back, but also knowing the new rper can kill them off before then if they choose. (User will not be allowed to use the cat outside this rp as it is still your character, unless you say otherwise.) Tell Me If I left Anything Out! This Is VERY CONFUSING!!!! Please Fix It So It's Not As Complicated! Thanks![/i]
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2017 18:33:28 GMT -5
Nami, Hello! You submitted this form to our border CedarClan as well, you cannot have the same cat in both clans! You are also missing something listed in the rules, please be sure to read everything and choose which character you want in what rp and then edit it, and then edit or resubmit and I can accept provided everything is fixed up. c:
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2017 23:04:18 GMT -5
exceed Could I know which of their parents is which for family tree reasons (which is the mother which is the father)?
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Post by Morticat on Sept 3, 2017 13:25:31 GMT -5
Leechfang || catdaddy || 32 moons || warrior, guard - Short, dark grey pelt with yellow eyes, long limbs with a few extra pounds on her.
She has nicked ears and a snaggle-tooth which earned her the name of Leechfang Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Would like an apprentice Personality: Good communicator and problem solver, enjoys being involved in big decision making and being of use. She is not too well at dealing with younger clanmates but she is trying to improve this. She feels a bit bitter about not having a higher rank in the clan, and believes she would best lead the Clan Mate/Crush: None Kits, if any: Goosepaw Relationships: Cindercloud (Mother, dead), Darkfire (Father, dead), Hawktail (Mate, dead) History: Previously from StreamClan, became a loner when she was an Apprentice with Hawktail and had her current kit, he got hit by a monster and from there she found PineClan and decided to join for the best interest of her kit Other: Fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 2
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Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Sept 3, 2017 14:08:24 GMT -5
Welcome to Pineclan! Hope Rain approves when she is back on!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2017 17:14:00 GMT -5
Morticat Welcome! Accepted. Also, about her formerly wanting her to come from StreamClan, there's already 3 (not including TimberClan) clans in this rp (including PineClan). If possible could she have just been a loner? I just feel iffy on another clan being in the midst someplace. I wouldn't mind if StreamClan is like... far away and over the mountains above PineClan territory (north not south, south is Oak and Cedar), and if they had no further point right now than to serve as history (as we already have a multiclan plot lol). I just don't want it to interfere with the main story if you get what I mean.
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Dustwind
When will my motivation return from the war? | Hetalia, Pokemon, Mystic Messenger, Horror
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Post by Dustwind on Sept 3, 2017 18:24:11 GMT -5
Flickpaw || Dustwind || 7 Moons || Collector, Fisher - A small semi-fluffy white and grey tom with pale blue eyes and black markings on his forelegs, nose, eyes, tail, and ears. One thing that stands out about his appearance is his abnormally short tail, being about half the size of a normal tail.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Surprise me!! Personality: Despite leaning heavily on the timid side, he enjoys being the goofball of the group and tries to make his friends laugh whenever possible. However, most of the time, he can be a bit awkward, thinking way too in depth about what to say before saying it. He likes to stay included in all social activities and tries to stay up to date on the latest gossip, though he can come off as rather nosy. One of his major flaws is his inability to stay focused, often allowing his mind to wonder while going about his daily tasks; something that could spell disaster if done at the wrong time, but he can't really help himself. Mate/Crush: N/A Kits, if any: N/A Relationships: Has very little memory of his mother and siblings. History: Born to a loner she-cat, he was the runt out of his litter of 4. When he was only a moon or so old, his mother abandoned him since he was very sickly and she didn't think that he would survive. Since she had 3 other kits to care for and with many dangers lurking in the shadows, she saw no other choice but to move on for the safety of her other children. Through a series of fortunate events, he found his way into Pineclan territory where he was taken in and raised. Other: Fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 3 [ I know this is kind of a pathetic joining form, but I'm open to collaborate with someone to give his past more depth. XD I just didn't want to add too many cats into the mix. ]
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Post by вєвє on Sept 3, 2017 18:28:12 GMT -5
Dusty || poisonbreeze || 7moons || Kittypet - A tall cat with sandy-colored fur. She has black spots like a leopard; around her pink nose the fur is darker while there is light golden fur surrounding her pale green eyes. As a kittypet she has a teal green collar, and her garden sits outside the clan's territory beyond its forest.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Would like to be an apprentice Personality: Dusty is out-going and kind, willing to talk to anyone; she wants to learn everything and anything she can - being extremely curious. She is curious and quick to anger. Her two-legs were nice but her dreams are filled with hunting and running through the trees, she remembers the stories her mother would tell of wild cats that live free of two-legs sharing prey and fighting for their clan, and since then she wanted to become a warrior but it wasn't until her two-legs moved to this new area that she could escape their nest.
Mate/Crush: N/A Kits, if any: N/A Relationships: [Leaving blank for now] History: Kittypet hoping for a new life free of her twolegs Other: Fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 3
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Dustwind
When will my motivation return from the war? | Hetalia, Pokemon, Mystic Messenger, Horror
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Post by Dustwind on Sept 3, 2017 18:57:44 GMT -5
Deerleap || Dustwind || 20 Moons || Warrior, Guard, Hunter - A medium sized ashy gray she-cat with soft brown eyes and fur than fades into dusty beige towards her belly, chest, muzzle, and paws. There's a small patch of white on her chin. Her fur thickens around her tail and neck, but her coat is slightly thinner than her clan mates.
Warrior Name or Apprentice Requests?: Would like an apprentice Personality: Being a young warrior, she has a fiery passion to do her job well in protecting he clan mates, but she is still on the naive side. She loves to teach those who are younger than her and eager to learn. Despite her outwardly friendly demeanor, she can be impatient and easily annoyed when things don't go exactly her way. What she lacks in size, she more than makes up for in technique when it comes to fighting. She does find it difficult to keep her temper at bay at times, which can lead her to rash actions. Mate/Crush: N/A Kits, if any: N/A Relationships: [Leaving blank for now] History: Clan born Other: Fishy If you ever quit or fall inactive and have an important role, do you want this cat... ? (select one): Option 3 [ Again, I'm open to collaborate with someone with her lineage and stuff just so we don't have too many cats involved. ]
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Post by .:*Leaf Sama*:.™ on Sept 3, 2017 19:04:10 GMT -5
Welcome! Hope Rain welcomes you as well!
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Dustwind
When will my motivation return from the war? | Hetalia, Pokemon, Mystic Messenger, Horror
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Post by Dustwind on Sept 3, 2017 19:49:36 GMT -5
Thank you!!
And welcome, other person~!!!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2017 20:26:13 GMT -5
Dustwind вєвє Both of you guys are accepted! owo Feel free to rp and I'll add you later. Koi, PineClan can meet your cat while hunting near twolegplace later if you want?
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