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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 6, 2017 22:15:40 GMT -5
[Hey! Not sure if you're using these entirely as 1x1's, I was going to say if you'd like another member for the Bloodclan scenario I'd love to design a charrie for it! If not, the journey plot (number 6 I believe) looks pretty enticing as well!]
But you are more than welcome to take plot six c: Did you want to use one, or multiple characters? Canons or OC's? ] I really enjoy the concept of idea 7 but im curious if you were thinking another warrior since she found the clans. Because of the name im assuming she is a warrior herself? If so to what clan? We could possibly mix in some of the forbidden romance if that works. I can also play a loner/kittypet/ectect just want to get a figure on the dynamics.) |
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 6, 2017 22:49:07 GMT -5
I think I got most of the back story I suppose I was mostly uncertain where she was now and what you were looking for in another character. I do well with a lot of explanation though so do feel free to ellaborate on anything.)) |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 6, 2017 23:06:29 GMT -5
[ it was originally a story I was writing, and I kinda wanted to roleplay it out for ideas, yknow?
But the gist of it is this;
Sun is born to Sandstorm & Firestar in a later litter that isn't mentioned in the books.
Firestar and Sandstorm giver her to Princess because they cant afford to lose a kit on the great journey.
She grows up as a kitty-pet until Princess slips up and tells her Firestar would've loved to have her as a warrior.
She learns about the clans, tells her foster mother that she wants to go find them and become a clan cat like she had been born to be.
So, Sun-- at the time, the name Firestar and Sandstorm had given her, even if she was called "strawberry" by her housefolk, she always preferred Sun-- goes out, and Starclan, seeing as they saw her as a warrior still, guided her to the clans.
When she arrived, she ran into a Windclan patrol, Onestar was among them. She became buddies with him, even after he found out her father was the one leader he had hostility towards.
She is told thst Onestar regrets leaving behind the friendship of him and Firestar, but he had to do it for the clan.
Onestar eventually guides her to Thunderclan, the clan she rightfully belongs to.
The plan was, Squirrelflight and Leafpool had dreams about their missing sister, and they knew right away it was her.
After a moon, Sun was welcomed into Thunderclan, made and apprentice named Sunpaw, and trained by Cloudtail or Cinderheart- i havent decided on that yet- until she was named Sunfeather.
She meets up with Onestar after gatherings, even after being a warrior, and these meetings led her to fall for the Windclan leader, hence why she has his kits, named Stormkit and Featherkit.
The plot was for her to realize that she is in Thunderclan and Onestar is Windclan, and she mustn't love him. So, she pushes herself to love one of the Thunderclan cats (in the story i wrote,it was Bumblestripe, but in this rp, it'll be your character)
Did that help any? ]
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 6, 2017 23:13:11 GMT -5
[ I also forgot to add;
I know Sunfeather is lowkey younger than Onestar by a lot,
I just thought it'd be cute? To open Onestar with a sweet hearted cat.
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 0:40:03 GMT -5
[ bumping this up because i'm bored & tired of annotating. ]
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 7, 2017 2:46:16 GMT -5
Yes, this is all excellent. I really do enjoy the premise and that outlines the exact details I was looking for. I suppose all that remains now is deciding which character I should use and what might appeal the most to you and Sunfeather. I have a decent selection of characters so if there is something specific you are looking for I can make adjustments
Shadowface- A black tom with a white flash on his chest and white paws, amber eyes. He is very confident and eager to improve himself and be a great warrior, he idolizes some older warriors in the clans. This one is a ways away from what you are looking for since he is technically half clan but does reside in Thunderclan and thats where his loyalties lay.
Wetwhisker - Black tom with white splotches over his body and "heavy" white whiskers. He isnt the most impressive specimen when it comes to fighting and is generally docile and laid back. (When I wrote him for his first arc he was a gifted medicinecat and I just cant picture him with anything but that kind nature.) Wetwhisker is good humored and patient. Though something of a pushover with his own matters and feelings he is keen to defend anyone else.
Thrushwing - Brown and tan splotched tom with pale yellow eyes. Thrushwing is full of self assurance and motivation. He pushes himself and others to their limits and though he has good intentions this is sometimes mistaken for elitism. He is the kind of cat you would want beside you to lighten the mood of a boring patrol but perhaps not a dangerous mission into enemy territory. It doesnt seem like Thrushwing has matured since he was first apprenticed and still lives life with that kit-like light in his eyes. Despite this appearance of irresponsibility he desires nothing more than to be a good mentor and is eternally frustrated he has not been made one yet but compensates by spending a good deal of time training playing with the clans kits and apprentices.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2017 12:18:54 GMT -5
[Hey! Not sure if you're using these entirely as 1x1's, I was going to say if you'd like another member for the Bloodclan scenario I'd love to design a charrie for it! If not, the journey plot (number 6 I believe) looks pretty enticing as well!]
But you are more than welcome to take plot six c: Did you want to use one, or multiple characters? Canons or OC's? ]
[Hey, no worries! Hmm, I'm thinking OC's would be best, so we can put our own spin on things. And maybe one character each to focus on, but we can always throw some NPC's in there for background/to get the whole travelling group dynamic? And sorry for the inactivity, I'm in and out of classes a bunch, haha] |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 15:27:29 GMT -5
madmatriarch ;; ah, all three are such lovely cats. I can choose to be honest. Maybe I can type up Sunfeather's description real quick and you can choose the cat that you'd feel fits with her?
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✨ Տեმɾ✨ ;; okay, Oc's it is! Did you plan for any romance or anything? If so, what kind of pairing? FxF, MxM ? (I'd prefer one of these considering I have two FxM ones going on currently, but if you're only comfortable with FxM then by all means, let me know, and that's what we will do)
On that note, I also do prefer to rp the tom
(unless it be FxF of course!)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2017 15:31:44 GMT -5
-` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾: [Sure, romance always adds a little something to the storyline! I'm cool with MxM if you want to try that!]
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 15:35:18 GMT -5
✨ Տեმɾ✨ ;; ah, sounds beautiful :') Just give me a bit to think up a character. I might even snatch one off of my 1x1s page cx
I also forgot to add; don't worry all to much about being active here. Because my activity isn't the greatest at the moment. I'm worrying about school, band and my winter guard. So currently, I'm not on much on Monday's, Tuesdays and Thursdays. I'm going to try to slip in a reply or two a day, but at what time they come will vary on when I manage to get on.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2017 16:01:24 GMT -5
-` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾: [Sounds wonderful! I'll just create a character and post it here then! Wispclaw: A lithe young warrior tom. Piercing green eyes. He is fawn-coloured with darker tabby stripes and paws. He has distinctly long whiskers that often twitch when he's nervous or scared, making him easy to read. He often approaches others first in conversation, and is outgoing and playful with those he enjoys being with. He is very analytical when it comes to decisions and so is very bad/slow to make them. He can be slow to trust any cat completely, and is more likely to forgive than forget. And that sounds good! I don't have too much of a set schedule at this point so I kind of pop by when I can, but I can guarantee once I'm on I'll at least stick around for an hour or so at a time  ]
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Post by Redclaw on Feb 7, 2017 16:02:21 GMT -5
(hey don't forget bout me!)
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Post by peach ⋆ on Feb 7, 2017 16:41:53 GMT -5
( ok, makes sense. so we have our characters, should we briefly set up the world and then other minor characters? if the clan takes place in the destroyed forest, it would be neat (albeit unrealistic) for the twoleg construction project to be suddenly abandoned so there's a ton of random twoleg junk everywhere, which could emphasize just how different the new bloodclan is from the original 4 clans. wow, this idea could be developed a lot... i think this plot has potential for an actual clan roleplay or maybe a small group rp? idk i'm just wondering since a 1x1 sounds a bit small for the scale of this clan. )
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 7, 2017 19:10:12 GMT -5
Of course! I kind of narrowed them down to some that I thought would make a better "father" figure but if you like by all means I can choose after hearing some more about your girl)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 23:18:40 GMT -5
-` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 : [Sounds wonderful! I'll just create a character and post it here then! Wispclaw: A lithe young warrior tom. Piercing green eyes. He is fawn-coloured with darker tabby stripes and paws. He has distinctly long whiskers that often twitch when he's nervous or scared, making him easy to read. He often approaches others first in conversation, and is outgoing and playful with those he enjoys being with. He is very analytical when it comes to decisions and so is very bad/slow to make them. He can be slow to trust any cat completely, and is more likely to forgive than forget. And that sounds good! I don't have too much of a set schedule at this point so I kind of pop by when I can, but I can guarantee once I'm on I'll at least stick around for an hour or so at a time ]
Cloudpaw(whisker) - a small, fluffy white tom with black scarred ears, a soft pelt, and gentle grey eyes. he has slight trouble seeing, being quite nearsighted. But that hasn't ever stopped him from being a warrior of Thunderclan. Born to Cloudtail and Brightheart, he is part of their only litter, his sister being Whitepaw(wing). He may have the same prefix as his father, but the two are very different. He was apprenticed to Brakenfur, and later becomes Cloudwhisker, after they attack the badgers and such. He does have kittypet roots that come from his father, often feeling embarrassed and hiding whenever it's mentioned. But, he is very determined to prove himself. He is also very loving and gentle, and he would love to have kits one day. Cloudpaw is a very fragile tom, unlike his father Cloudtail. He is very dependent, but he can be as fierce as any other Thunderclan warrior there is. He also, though it is very strange, loves to swim.
Alderberry - a young and short tom with a dark brown tabby pelt. He has soft green eyes, that seem to blaze and flame when he gets angry. Alderberry is one of Tigerstar and Sasha's kits, though he refused to join Riverclan, instead, joining Thunderclan to be with his half-brother Brambleclaw. He is soft, gentle and caring, but he does have a fierce tongue. He speaks whats on his mind and can be quite ambitious. With that being said, Alderberry can also be a gentle, caring soul. He can be sweet, soft and loving when he wishes, and he most definitely had a soft side for kits of all sizes. He can't wait to have an apprentice, since he hasn't ever found she-cats attractive; hence why he isn't waiting to have kits.
Nightjay - a young black tom cat with soft silver ripples ruffling his pelt. He is lean and muscular, with rather large ears. He has light blue eyes, almost a frosty color. They grow cold when his clanmates accuse him of not being loyal. Much like Russetfur and Boulder, this young tom cat came from a group of rogues, and or Bloodclan. He wasn't ever associated with any clan cat, but was born into Bloodclan, and left after the clan died. He was well around five moons when he joined Shadowclan. Nightjay was named Nightpaw, and apprenticed by Russetfur herself. He lives up to the warrior code, refusing to let it die. He is loyal, kind and caring, but he can have a sharp tongue that might get him into trouble. He hasn't ever found an interest in she-cats, or kits. Though, he'd enjoy an apprentice.
I'm sorry their bios are a little messy ^^" ] |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 23:19:23 GMT -5
(hey don't forget bout me!) |
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Post by Redclaw on Feb 7, 2017 23:20:51 GMT -5
(ok then. should we go somewhere else? seriously, this thread kind of went out of control XD)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 23:21:53 GMT -5
( ok, makes sense. so we have our characters, should we briefly set up the world and then other minor characters? if the clan takes place in the destroyed forest, it would be neat (albeit unrealistic) for the twoleg construction project to be suddenly abandoned so there's a ton of random twoleg junk everywhere, which could emphasize just how different the new bloodclan is from the original 4 clans. wow, this idea could be developed a lot... i think this plot has potential for an actual clan roleplay or maybe a small group rp? idk i'm just wondering since a 1x1 sounds a bit small for the scale of this clan. ) |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 23:29:43 GMT -5
Of course! I kind of narrowed them down to some that I thought would make a better "father" figure but if you like by all means I can choose after hearing some more about your girl)
Sunfeather - a pale ginger she-cat with darker tabby stripes, a fluffy tail, and pale colored eyes. One is blue, and the other is green. She was born in Thunderclan to Firestar and Sandstorm, but her parents gave her to Princess, due to how weak and tiny she was. But when she became about the size of an apprentice, Princess told her where she could find her real mother and father. So, being as curious as she is, she had set out for the Thunderclan camp past the mountains. She eventually reached the camp, she was taken in, and became Sunpaw. She was apprenticed to Cloudtail until she became Sunfeather. After Sunfeather earned her warrior name, she became intrigued with the Windclan leader, Onestar. Never mentioning her secret meetings with him after gatherings, she slowly fell in love. But, once she knew she was boring his kits, she let him know. He turned her away, saying they would indeed learn their father, but she would care for them until they did. So, now she is stuck with her kits, Stormkit and Featherkit. She is prodded to tell who the father is, but she is hoping a Thunderclan tom will soon come to aide and father her beautiful kits.
Stormkit - a soft brown tabby tom, with curled whiskers like Onestar, a long tail, sleek and short pelt, with amber eyes. He looks just like Onestar.
Featherkit - a small fluffy brown she-kit with hints of ginger fur. She has soft blue eyes, much like her mother. Her frame matches Sunfeather's, but she looks like Onestar as well.
I hope it's okay? And i added the Kits description just for the hell of it cx ] |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 23:30:34 GMT -5
(ok then. should we go somewhere else? seriously, this thread kind of went out of control XD) |
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Post by Redclaw on Feb 7, 2017 23:40:37 GMT -5
(ok, well it is your turn on our roleplay.)
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 7, 2017 23:56:09 GMT -5
*Redclaw swished his tail. clearly, the insult had bugged him* I don't believe that. neither does most of the clan. *he stared pointedly at Ashberry* you Windclan cats only think that because we say a few things that we probably shouldn't. |
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 8, 2017 0:52:42 GMT -5
Of course! I kind of narrowed them down to some that I thought would make a better "father" figure but if you like by all means I can choose after hearing some more about your girl)
Sunfeather - a pale ginger she-cat with darker tabby stripes, a fluffy tail, and pale colored eyes. One is blue, and the other is green. She was born in Thunderclan to Firestar and Sandstorm, but her parents gave her to Princess, due to how weak and tiny she was. But when she became about the size of an apprentice, Princess told her where she could find her real mother and father. So, being as curious as she is, she had set out for the Thunderclan camp past the mountains. She eventually reached the camp, she was taken in, and became Sunpaw. She was apprenticed to Cloudtail until she became Sunfeather. After Sunfeather earned her warrior name, she became intrigued with the Windclan leader, Onestar. Never mentioning her secret meetings with him after gatherings, she slowly fell in love. But, once she knew she was boring his kits, she let him know. He turned her away, saying they would indeed learn their father, but she would care for them until they did. So, now she is stuck with her kits, Stormkit and Featherkit. She is prodded to tell who the father is, but she is hoping a Thunderclan tom will soon come to aide and father her beautiful kits.
Stormkit - a soft brown tabby tom, with curled whiskers like Onestar, a long tail, sleek and short pelt, with amber eyes. He looks just like Onestar.
Featherkit - a small fluffy brown she-kit with hints of ginger fur. She has soft blue eyes, much like her mother. Her frame matches Sunfeather's, but she looks like Onestar as well.
I hope it's okay? And i added the Kits description just for the hell of it cx ]((Thats all fine! Real life comes first.)) Im thinking either Shadowface or Thrushwing. Shadowface is a good experienced warrior who is trying to prove his loyalty to his own clan and if the topic of Featherkit and Stormkit was ever brought up he would be the most understanding of what being half clan is and that it doesn't change you into a bad warrior... On the flipside if you wanted drama later down the road we could also go the other way and have him turn cold over it because he holds a grudge against his own parents for making things difficult. He would still love the kits but maybe accuse Sunfeather of being selfish or something? Food for thought. Thrushwing on the other hand has all of that maturing needed done, he might be a little awkward in a relationship but he is great with children and would probably bond with her kits first. (He wants an apprentice so badly it doesnt hurt to familiarize early) Taking the responsibility of a father on would also make for some good character development on his end. He would realize that his actions start to mean something and would take things more seriously with a family in mind. There are a couple different ways we could go with it. but this narrows it down. Anything sound appealing out of this? Honestly both prospects sound fun to me, I have a little more experience playing Shadowface so if we cant decide that can be the coin flip decision but either is 100% fine to me. |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 8, 2017 0:59:37 GMT -5
[ with the potential drama you brought up with Shadowface, I feel like we should use him :') Just because the thought sounds so much better then the cats just developing feelings yknow? ]
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 8, 2017 1:12:38 GMT -5
[ with the potential drama you brought up with Shadowface, I feel like we should use him :') Just because the thought sounds so much better then the cats just developing feelings yknow? ] Excellent, someone who shares my love for making things difficult. We can discuss the symantics of said drama later if you like. Since this story is your baby would you like to do the honor of setting the scene? I'm good to go with this unless there is anything else you wish to bring up. |
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 8, 2017 1:14:49 GMT -5
[ I'll gladly start; I'm just unsure when. Either tonight, or possibly tomorrow.
But, question, what are your reply lengths typically? ]
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 8, 2017 1:18:07 GMT -5
(( There is some room for fluctuation depending on story pace but I never really drop below a good paragraph. My average is 2-3 But I have been known to many a time use 5+ depending on the sittuation.))
Edit* Also, start whenever you are comfortable. I work tomorrow evening but its a short shift, otherwise ill be consistently free the next two days.
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Post by -` gumi ´- .✫ 🐾 on Feb 8, 2017 1:21:14 GMT -5
[ ah, that sounds lovely c: I typically write three or four, mostly three, sometimes two. I suppose it all depends on my muse.
Nonetheless, I shall start soon. But I might just get off for the night, I have homework to finish up and such. But I will for sure be on tomorrow. Goodnight, dear! ]
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Post by madmatriarch on Feb 8, 2017 1:32:44 GMT -5
Thank you! I wish the same to yourself and good luck with your studies. ))
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Post by Redclaw on Feb 8, 2017 16:18:04 GMT -5
*Redclaw swished his tail. clearly, the insult had bugged him* I don't believe that. neither does most of the clan. *he stared pointedly at Ashberry* you Windclan cats only think that because we say a few things that we probably shouldn't. *Redclaw swished his tail again* i'm sure Firestar has his reasons. "A leader's word is law" according to the warrior code. the other clans can say anything they like about us, but isn't Firestar himself a kittypet? or has it been so long that everybody forgot that? |
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