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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:07:19 GMT -5
(XD yeah i checked before i made the comment to be sure and it said 20)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:07:25 GMT -5
ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ"Hey I didn't ask for you to play dirty!", he teased playfully as he ounce on her and playfully cuffed her ear.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:07:45 GMT -5
Coal rolled making Adder fall off or be crushed Coal didn't even bother talking he crashed into Adder and grabbed his back leg.a thing he had seen in Fawns fight the hole made Adder like a turtle on its back.he wanted to maul Adders leg but he was clearly but wearing him down was a better idea.
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Post by Dawnrise on Nov 4, 2016 22:17:45 GMT -5
Flame was more than happy to watch the fight unfold before him. He hadnn't exactly planned it, but he saw that Adder was stronger and more experienced than Coal, so he had an advantage. Seeing this night cause other cats to see why they care about the clan growing soft.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:19:58 GMT -5
Dawnrise ikr this is enjoyable!)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:20:05 GMT -5
(Coal has more experience and is older i just pointed that out and it is like that until panthermoon comes online and changes it.)
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 22:26:23 GMT -5
Adder was originally supposed to be an older warrior of the clan, I never intended him to be under 30 moons, I only just happened to notice when you mentioned it. I'm changing it as of now, he's 68 moons and he has had the same amount of experience as Coal. We can leave it at that.  ]
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 22:28:51 GMT -5
Adder took advantage of his position and kicked his hind legs up, throwing Coal off onto the ground beside him. Heaving himself to his paws, he struck out with a paw, landing it firmly on his muzzle, feeling the satisfied cracking of claws hitting something. He stepped backwards, limping slightly from Coal's previous move.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:38:22 GMT -5
Coal didn't care about playing dirty this was his reputation on the line he would do anything to win.he countered Adder by flicking dirt in his eyes he pounced onto of him "Im gonna send you to the Elders den where you belong!",he targeted adders legs if his legs were damaged the fight would be over.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:40:25 GMT -5
ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ reply to me when you can)
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 22:47:58 GMT -5
Adder hissed, "In your dreams." He felt a twinge in his leg but ignored it as he barreled into Coal's side after dodging his tactic, he had only missed it by a few hairlengths though. He had felt Coal's claws pierce some of his fur. He caused Coal to lose his balance and giving him a rough shove in the side, he lifted a paw to rake across the deputies' eye as he limped forwards at incredible speed for the injury.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:53:44 GMT -5
Coal moved at the last Adders claw piercing his ear it looked like his eyes were bleeding he could use that to his advantage.if he looked like he was retreating he could use the move he saw the rouge use.Coal mainly learnt moves from others when he saw somecat perform a move he could mimic it and improve it,but he liked to invent his own also he was in alot of pain but didn't care he slashed at adders pelt then pretended to retreat and climbed the closed tree.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 22:56:23 GMT -5
(I've been in two battles now Aspenclaw vs Fawn and now Coal vs Adder Edit: forgot about that small fight with sol)
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Post by Panthermoon on Nov 4, 2016 23:07:31 GMT -5
((I have changed Adder's age to 68, like was mentioned. Guys, the thing is, is that Noire is Scourge's son, and was the successor when Scourge was murdered. Noire is trying to be a little more righteous than his father, and sees the wisdom in rationalizing a situation, instead of blowing it out of proportion. In the books, BloodClan was cool, slick, and collected. Not savages. They killed in battle and when they needed something. Noire isn't stopping that. He just doesn't see the need to fight the rogues when there isn't a serious threat at the moment.))
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:09:13 GMT -5
(I know and coal isnt soft im gonna take a break be back later)
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 23:16:43 GMT -5
I have to poof as well. Adder has a short temper anyways. That's the build of his char. ]
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:19:22 GMT -5
Well Coals char build is Robot)
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Post by Panthermoon on Nov 4, 2016 23:22:25 GMT -5
Noire, choosing to intervene the skirmish, leapt into the middle of the battle. He raked his yellowing, dog-tooth reinforced claws across the noses of both Adder and Coal. "Enough!" He yowled. "I am your leader, you take up your quarrels with me! You all complain that this clan is made up of kittypets, but look at you! They have the sense not to fight each other! They realize, they know how crucial being one unit is! Be rational! Be smart!" He snarled, black tail lashing angrily. "Or I will terminate both of you. Is that understood?"
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:25:21 GMT -5
Panthermoonｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅDaryl turned to Anesse and said,"I think that is Noire. Follow me."
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:26:21 GMT -5
Coal snorted "He attacked me i pushed him off and walked away he attacked again,he thinks you are going soft" Coal didn't need a lesson from Noire "Are you saying that i should have just taken a beating and wait for you to come?" he said adder was out of line it wasn't coals fault or place Noires to interfere.
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Post by Panthermoon on Nov 4, 2016 23:28:11 GMT -5
Noire, turning his head, noticed Daryl and Anesse. "Daryl..." He said lowly, though not in a negative manner, "This isn't a good time..." He looked back at Adder and Coal, a dark glare of warning. "Is this a recruit?"
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Post by Panthermoon on Nov 4, 2016 23:30:20 GMT -5
Coal snorted "He attacked me i pushed him off and walked away he attacked again,he thinks you are going soft" Coal didn't need a lesson from Noire "Are you saying that i should have just taken a beating and wait for you to come?" he said adder was out of line it wasn't coals fault or place Noires to interfere. |
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 23:32:31 GMT -5
Aneese nodded and followed, bristling in the presence of Noire as the tom had approached. She glanced nervously up at Daryl before reaching out her snout to get a whiff of the tom. She recoiled slightly and was unsure whether or not to greet him properly. She hesitantly circled the leader, finishing with the same ritual she had done with Daryl, which was touching her nose softly to Noire's cheek. She trotted back over to her place and looked expectantly.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:33:17 GMT -5
PanthermoonHe nodded and sat down by Anesse waiting for this fight to end.
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 23:33:48 GMT -5
Adder stopped although cold rage still burned in him. He exchanged a glance between Noire and Coal before exiting upon the arrival of a new recruit.
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Post by Panthermoon on Nov 4, 2016 23:36:34 GMT -5
((Sorry ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ there's a lot he's handling right now. I'll send another charrie over to handle it!))
Bloodsun, a close friend of Noire, padded over. She dipped her head to Daryl, then eyed Aneese kindly. "Hello, I'm Bloodsun. Noire is a little preoccupied. What reason have you come to our camp?" |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:37:16 GMT -5
Coal snorted "He attacked me i pushed him off and walked away he attacked again,he thinks you are going soft" Coal didn't need a lesson from Noire "Are you saying that i should have just taken a beating and wait for you to come?" he said adder was out of line it wasn't coals fault or place Noires to interfere. "Escalate them!? all i did was call Adder and he provoked a fight" Coal scowled Noire wanted getting what he was trying to say. "What about Flame and the others who just watched to they get scratched to Ugh your always so difficult!" he sighed walking away. (I got a idea for a plot twist) Panthermoon only
Just an idea but what if Noire killed Scouge by accident in a argument Coal saw it happen but covered it up and knocked Noire out so he would forget and feel guilty,Coal kept the secret when he became deputy.
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Post by Panthermoon on Nov 4, 2016 23:40:31 GMT -5
((I don't know. The thing about Scourge's death is that he was murdered out at the Moonstone, and Noire was at camp while Scourge was gone... We can turn it into a kind of murder mystery, while we wait for more people to join.))
Noire watched Adder and his deputy walk away, letting out a long sigh. He turned back to Daryl and Aneese, giving Bloodsun a grateful glance.
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Post by ｃ ｏ ｕ ｒ ａ ｇ ｅ on Nov 4, 2016 23:42:35 GMT -5
Eeep, I have to poof! I'll see you all tomorrow! ]
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2016 23:43:54 GMT -5
(Yeah i just thought of it,nobody would see it coming Maybe noire went out of camp without others noticing.)
Soot had just awoken at the sound of Noires yelling she yawned and turned to see.new cats in camp "Wow more cat,i hope they are not as grumpy as Coal and Adder" she smiled walking up to great the new warriors.
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