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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 19:24:32 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] Ahh okay! I wasn't sure if she was on or not.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 4, 2017 20:06:29 GMT -5
Alrighty, so two things. I think the age difference that you guys mentioned is a little concerning because warriors cats are humanized a lot. So it's be like a woman have a kid right after giving birth. Little odd. I typically have people wait until the last litter is apprrnticed. So a 6 moon difference is fine.
The second thing us munelily. Please keep your names in English and only use things the cats would know.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 20:15:55 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] Would it be okay if Mune was her loner name? before she came to the clan? But decided to keep it as a prefix? I should have mentioned somewhere that Munelily was a loner with her mother before joining the clan, along with Mistyshade, but if you still want me to change it I can.
I dont want to be rude in any way shape or form, but the spelling Mune is the English spelling, 胸 This is the written japanese word for Mune.
But I changed her name to Silverwhispers if that's okay.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 4, 2017 20:24:03 GMT -5
I'm a Japanese major.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 20:25:11 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] Oh okay, i didn't know that. Sorry! But I changed it, is the name i changed it to okay?
I wish i was a japanese major
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 4, 2017 20:28:40 GMT -5
The new name is fine and please put that information somewhere in her form. Once the changes I've mentioned have been made you should be good to rp.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 20:59:54 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] i already changed the ages to where there 6 moons apart correct me if i got the wrong ages, and i changed her name. So everything should be good.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 21:13:16 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] History for both misty and silver - Silver's mother Aeon left her at the clans camp entrance when she was 5 moons old, when she was 6 moons her brother was born but she hadnt seen her mother since she abandon her. When silver was 11 moons she was out hunting and her mother appeared, but this time her brother was with Aeon, Aeon then left Misty in Silvers care when he was was 5 moons old, when silver got back to camp, she told the leader that her mother just left Misty under her care.
My phone is being stupid and not updating my post ill add this to there actual forms and apple, cherry's, and swans bio
So for apple cherry and swan - Appleleaf was the first born and the only one, her mother died at child birth although her father was still alive, when Appleleaf became an apprentice her father left the clan for a female cat, when Apple was 12 moons old her father came back with Cherry who was 6 moons old, he soon died of illness. 7 moons later, a female cat named swan came to the clan claiming to be Cherry's sister, she told cherry and the leader that cherry's and her mother died before she traveled to the clan.
Hope these make sense or aren't as complicated.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 4, 2017 21:19:00 GMT -5
Spirit; I got to be honest. Your cats would not survive in AstralClan territory if they were abandoned like that. :/
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 21:32:51 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] I went back and read through it, i meant to say the clan camp entrance but i was being rushed sorry ill change it when i get home.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 4, 2017 21:34:23 GMT -5
She just waltzed up to a hostile clan, through a dangerous territory, and dropped off her kids at the entrance? Twice?
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 21:45:34 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] not twice only once, When silver was out hunting she came across her mother who then gave misty to silver. I actually hadnt thought it through that much but if it makes things easier they can be clan born.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 4, 2017 21:52:29 GMT -5
I don't mind them being loners. It's just the complicated backstory that's a little odd ^^;
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 22:48:26 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] I agree it is a complicated backstory im going to re write it and hopefully i don't leave anything out this time, and im not being rushed lol
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 4, 2017 23:36:46 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] So I updated the backstories, and honestly if they dont seem right in anyway or dont make sense feel free to go in and change them, but they should make more sense now.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 5, 2017 11:40:33 GMT -5
They are very similar lol. So your only full clanblooded cat is Appleleaf? And I didn't see where you mentioned Swan?
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 5, 2017 11:45:51 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] yes very similar. i like to make my cats suffer, I mentioned her as the female cat, but i put her name in it, and yes the only full blooded one is appleleaf, my next charries are going to be full blooded.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 5, 2017 12:58:53 GMT -5
Okay, I think this is fine. Accepted.
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Post by ♡ Bun ♡ on Apr 5, 2017 13:08:29 GMT -5
[ Ooc: ] awesome sauce!
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Catinthebag
Dabs at the sound of a microwave beeping
Pronouns: He/him or they/them
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Post by Catinthebag on Apr 5, 2017 16:29:25 GMT -5
Acornfall | Tom | 42 Moons (3 years 6 months) This peculiar tom, with his lack of a tail, is a marbled dark brown with white paws and neck, bright orange eyes, and a slender build accompanied by a narrow face. Having lost his tail in an accident when he explored all too close to abandoned twoleg machines and messing with them. He's adventurous and hearty, loving to be around his clan and be with them, as well as help to train apprentices with none of his own. He can be a bit weird at times, not knowing when to hold his tongue always, but his intentions are pure and noble. Acornfall takes learning seriously in all matters and is a bit of a jack of all trades. A bit of this and a bit of that goes for him. He also secretly loves to swim, and is actually terribly afraid of heights. ( Catinthebag) Rank: Warrior/Mystic Crush and/or Rival: None Family: None Are you open to adding other members to your family tree?: That depends on how I feel when I start rping. Lightningclaw | Tom | 26 Moons (2 years 2 months) Lightningclaw is a long-legged and wiry-haired gray and black tom with bright golden eyes that sometimes seem to flash like lightning, hence his name as he was the first to have opened his eyes out of the litter. He's maintained a kittenish personality and a nose for adventure and curiosity. He's an over-the-top eccentric kind of cat who enjoys being and staying active. More of a talker than a fighter, and not all the lights on upstairs, he frequently makes a fool of himself much to the amusement and enjoyment of the others. even when he knows he's being made fun of however, he doesn't take it to heart and tends to be rather good natured. He loves to go on any sort of odd or extra missions that require exploring in or outside of the territory and is actually very good for such tasks, having an eye for tracking and recognizing other animal tracks. ( Catinthebag) Rank: Warrior/Lorekeeper Crush and/or Rival: None Family: None Are you open to adding other members to your family tree?*: Same as above. Password: Cstrawberry |
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 5, 2017 20:56:42 GMT -5
((Hi! Your forms look good but if you want to be a Mystic or a Lorekeeper, you need to complete the requirements on the front page. Also, I generally only allow one per member so choose wisely!))
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 6, 2017 1:17:13 GMT -5
Silverwind: Please review my comments so I can add you to the rp.
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Catinthebag
Dabs at the sound of a microwave beeping
Pronouns: He/him or they/them
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Post by Catinthebag on Apr 6, 2017 1:26:06 GMT -5
ＯＯＣ - Ah, I knew I was forgetting something. Sorry about that. I'll keep Acornfall as a mystic then. I'll also take a while to write up the story/fortune telling but I'll put it here when I have it.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 6, 2017 13:54:18 GMT -5
OKie Dokie. If I think your story is up to snuff, I will and Mystic on to him.
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Post by lozi on Apr 6, 2017 20:20:09 GMT -5
Password: NPomegranate
Vixen | Female | 12 Moons
Vixen is quite the athletic looking cat, with a long, lithe body, and muscular legs. Her coat is mainly russet, darkest on her back and sides and lighter shades on her head, tail, and underbelly. Her coloring is palest on her chest. Her fur is short, but thickens into a long haired, feathery tail. Her tail has a dark russet streak from base to tail tip. Her eyes are a strong emerald green. ~ηємєѕιѕ~
Rogue
Swiftheart | Male | 15 Moons
The oriental shorthair is member of the siamese breed, with a triangular head, almond eyes, and large ears. Their bodies are elongated, and very thin and muscular. Swiftheart has very large ears, and has a bicolor (brown and white) fur pattern. The dominant color of his pelt is brown, but he has white socks, underbelly, and on his face. He has brown spots over his eyes, and nose, and a streak from between his ears into his back. His shoulders have patches of white which lead into his white chest. His legs are very sinewy, and his tail thin and bony. His irises are very dark grey, almost black. ~ηємєѕιѕ~
Warrior
Thistlepaw | Female | 6 Moons
An American Bobtail, she is very heavy-set and broad shouldered. She is large for her age because of her breed. She is a brown pelted she-cat with black tabby markings, thickest around her legs, making tiger like markings along her back and sides. Her fur gradients from chestnut brown dusty tan from her back to her belly. She has a fluffy, black pompom of a tail, and white socks, chin and chest. Her eyes are a pale amber. ~ηємєѕιѕ~
Apprentice
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 9, 2017 20:15:00 GMT -5
Hey, your forms look good but you didnt put anything about their personalities, which you dont have to do but I find it makes people more willing to rp with your characters.
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Post by lozi on Apr 10, 2017 19:26:03 GMT -5
Oh sorry! I completely forgot about that. I'll get to it when I can.
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Catinthebag
Dabs at the sound of a microwave beeping
Pronouns: He/him or they/them
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Post by Catinthebag on Apr 10, 2017 22:43:09 GMT -5
PHOOEY!!! I forgot to write. xfogpathx Can you just add my characters but have them with no extra rank besides warrior for now? I want to rp but I keep forgetting to. I also feel like I'd write a story better if I just knew other peoples characters better in general than just guessing. |
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Post by lozi on Apr 11, 2017 9:57:46 GMT -5
I'm going to pass on this RP. I've joined into several other ones, and I don't want to get in and not have adequate writing for the other people. I haven't finished my forms yet, so I probably won't be able to get them done.
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Post by xfogpathx on Apr 11, 2017 11:56:57 GMT -5
Sure, cat, no problem.
I'm sorry to hear that, Nem. Well either way good luck I'm your rps.
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